Wednesday, October 05, 2005

"Morning Classes"

The spoon, heaped high with nourishment
Was guided by the hand with tender-loving-care
Through the ether and crashed against my teeth,
Shattering them into tiny shards
And bruising my tongue.

I taste blood and look with resentment
On the retreating hand
and now empty spoon.

1 Comments:

At 1:03 p.m., Blogger Phinneas Q Jacksmith said...

Thanks a lot! This is my very first attempt at conveying a thought or feeling rather than saying "I'm going to try to write a poem! Durrrr!"

Thanks again... I'm going to try to keep it up.

 

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